I like Livy's first pitch is good because you can get a different point of view of how the teacher talk about there jobs because i know my mentor made it seem that being a teacher isn't the right thing to do during this time. Also i think that by having a different topic to write about from internship would make the reader more into the writing.
I liked Maira's last pitch i think that having the perspective of the camera and having little thing to talk about is really unique and i think having different way to write the article will have a spice to the book.
I liked Jeffrey last pitch because i think that this article could add a humor to the book and it can also have a different type of writing to the book. This pitch can make a good story for other to enjoy
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